Showing posts with label coming of age. Show all posts
Showing posts with label coming of age. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 16, 2018

A Talk With Henry - a short story



When I attended Northeast Louisiana State College (Now University of Louisiana Monroe) in the 60s, there was a bar called the Trianon not far off campus. An old black man named Henry was the bartender, and he always looked regal in his white coat and black bowtie. He was also always there for the students and available for fatherly advice across the bar. After graduating, I let fourteen years elapse before returning to Monroe. On a trip to Florida with former girlfriend Gayle, I'd regaled her with tales of my adventures at the Trianon, and she'd convinced me to take a side trip to see if it was still there. The bar was there, though the name had changed. Everything about the place and the nearby college campus, in fact, had changed. I contemplated as much during our driving leg from Monroe to New Orleans.

Though I don't remember the exact year I wrote A Talk With Henry, I do remember that the trip to Florida and the side trips to Monroe and New Orleans got me thinking about writing a novel that would encompass some of my memories. More years passed before I wrote Big Easy, Book #1 of my French Quarter Mystery Series. I never owned a red Mustang convertible, but I've always wanted to.


A Talk With Henry

I'd driven past that specific Interstate off-ramp more times than I cared to count. This day was different. Something took control, guiding me down a winding southern byway to a place I'd buried beneath the shifting sands of time. I soon realized it was a journey I'd long anticipated.
The pitted country blacktop soon became a tree-lined boulevard leading to a college rectangle. I stopped, got out, and stared. Little had changed in twenty years. Visions of the old college, devoid of even a single student, assaulted my brain, and I couldn't turn away.
Waning summer had left a pall in the air, the place deserted except for a pigeon pecking at a cigarette butt and a lone jogger bent over in a huff. A lazy water sprinkler did little more than cast slow-motion rainbows against the sidewalk. If the campus had been a corpse, I was a curious child peeking through the mortuary window. A horn honking behind me broke my trance.
 Just off campus, I found what had drawn me—a barroom catering to college students. It caused my broken crux of faded memory to flash like southern lightning. After a gasp of humid breath, I wheeled into the parking lot.
 The building was mostly the same except for a coat of garish paint. The same railing of rusted steel surrounded the parking lot with pea gravel and broken oyster shells. Faded warehouses have framed either side. Mike's Place flashed in purple and gold lettering from a neon sign. For a moment, I thought I was at the wrong place. But only for a moment.
 A weather-beaten sign on the roof proclaimed the name I remembered. Trianon. It beckoned me from the car, and I hurried to accept its invitation.
 The hot Louisiana sun sucked oxygen from my lungs as I strolled across the parking lot. An explosion of trashcans erupted on the side of the building, followed by a brindle cat screeching as he bounded from the heap. The big tom skipped past me in a frightened sideways motion, then disappeared in a rush behind the building. The trash lid revolved like a percussive top before falling silent on broken concrete.
 Silence returned me to reality when I reached the black-painted door. Light-headed from the heat, or maybe suffocating demons from my past, I grabbed the handle and pulled. Icy refrigerated air blasted my face. Engulfing me in a dry wave, it sent a chill down my neck, reviving memories of many sweltering southern summers.
 "Come in heah," the little man behind the bar drawled.
 I took a quick glance around the room. Things had changed. Once dark, the walls were now vivid white, decorated with black stripes. Fluorescent brightness, reminiscent of a New York bistro, replaced the dim coolness of my memory. I sat on a tall stool and waited for the smiling bartender.
 He had a crooked grin and mortician's complexion, his shirt the color of a typewriter ribbon. White double-pleated linen pants matched the barroom's theme, and connected diamonds decorated his tie. When he smiled, his eyes focused on a spot between my eyes.
 "What can I get you, big guy?" he said.
 He continued to polish a glass with his white cloth and waited for my answer. I looked at pictures of colorful specialty drinks taped to the smoked-glass mirror behind him. It only took me a moment to point to a picture.
 "Hurricane. House specialty. Three-fifty with the souvenir glass. Two-fifty without." he said.
 "With."
 “You bet,” he said with a wink. “Everybody needs a memory. Where you from?"
 "Oklahoma," I answered, more interested in the bar than conversation.
 "Oweeee, boomer sooner! What'cha do up there?"
 "Work in the oil patch."
 "Got a cousin in Enid in oil," he said above the whining blender. "Jake Perkins. Know him?"
 My shake of the head didn't surprise him. He continued pouring the icy pink concoction into a large glass decorated in reds and greens. Adding a straw, cherry, and slice of orange, he slid it across the polished counter.
 "Not too fast," he said. “Name's Mike. What’s yours?"
 "John Tolliver."
 "What brings you to town, Mr. John?"
 "I went to school here years ago."
 With a knowing grin, he returned to his aimless glass polishing. "Summer vacation," he said. "Ain't many people around right about now."
 "When I lived here, an old black man waited bar."
 "Henry," he said. "Died a few years back."
 Before I could reply, a couple entered, sitting on the opposite end of the long counter. The man made a production of lighting his companion's cigarette as Mike popped the cotton cloth across his arm.
 "Yell if you can handle another," he said.
 Hot and thirsty, I sipped the syrupy drink and pivoted on the stool to look around. Then, either the rum or the moment nailed me. Maybe both. Like a motion picture fading into another scene, my imagination recreated the room as I remembered it. In my brain's recesses, fluorescent lighting dimmed, and the walls darkened. Jarring ring of pinball machines in the back, and labored strains of Mick Jagger began emanating from a jukebox.
 Scratched marble and corroded chrome replaced Mike's white plastic tables. His black and white tile had become dark, oiled wood. Blinking twice, I turned around.
 Gone were the bartender and his two customers, replaced in my mind by an old black man with short, snowy white hair and a tiny mustache. A bow tie girded the collar of his starched white shirt as he polished a glass with a soft cloth clutched in his gnarled hands. When he spotted me, he pushed his wire-framed glasses up on his forehead, leaving two burnished dents in the sides of his nose. He grinned, revealing a complete set of shining teeth still firmly set in his sunken cheeks. I stared in disbelief.
 "Henry? That you?"
 "Sure is. Where you been?"
 "Away. I wasn't sure you'd be here."
 Henry's chuckle dissolved into a rheumatic cough. He stopped polishing the glass, leaning for a moment against the bar.
 "Where else would I be? Ol' Henry's always here."
 It was no lie. Henry had seemed a permanent fixture of the place. As much as its worn stools and dark wood. I couldn't recall visiting the Trianon without seeing his ageless face behind the bar.
 "Whatcha gonna have?"
 "Draw one," I said.
 Winking, Henry took a frosted mug from the freezer, filling it from the tap behind the bar until a foamy head poured over the lip.
 "You remembered," he said.
 I did remember. During my seventeenth year and first visit to the Trianon, I was anxious about what to order.
 "Beer," I'd said.
 "What kind of beer?" Henry asked, staring over his wire-rims.
 "Tap," I'd said, spying the spigot.
 "You mean a draw. Next time you want a beer, just say Henry, draw one. That's all you gotta do."
 I smiled as the recollection evoked a much deeper memory that sent a melancholy wave cresting across my bow.
 "Your lady friend never came," he said, handing me the draw.
 "No."
 The loose layer of ebony skin on his neck wriggled. I nodded when he said, “You made it anyway, didn't you?"
 Once, long ago, I'd tutored a girl in math. Not just any girl. The homecoming queen. A gorgeous young woman who wouldn't have otherwise noticed a confident, shy sophomore. She was flunking math and resorted to asking for my help. When she aced the course, her warm kiss thrilled me. Enough so that I managed a stammered invitation to her for a beer at the Trianon. I waited alone until the place closed, hoping for an explanation that, like my date, never arrived. I remembered Henry’s commiseration as I sipped the draw.
"She musta got sick or something."
 We both knew she hadn’t. Didn't matter because the old man had helped ease me through the crisis. It was a moment I'd never forgotten.
 "Getcha another?"
 My eyes popped open. I leaned against the counter for support, trying to focus on the smiling man bedecked in black and white. Henry was gone, as was the dark interior of the bar. I gasped for a reply to his question.
 “No," I finally said, seeing the empty Hurricane glass. “How much do I owe you?"
 “Three-fifty," he said.
 I started for the door, handing him a five, advising him to keep the change.
 “Wait up," he said. "You forgot your glass."
 “Keep it,” I said. "I don't need it now."
 He scratched his head and returned to wiping the bar as I walked out.
 Glaring sunlight and a blast of humid air struck me square in the face when I stepped outside. Still light-headed from three ounces of rum, I wobbled back to the car, my dilated eyes burning from barroom smoke. I found the brindle tomcat perched on the hood.
 He bounded off in a single fluid motion, finally stopping at a safe distance to yawn and lick his paws. After stretching, the feral prince strolled away to view the garbage cans awaiting his afternoon inspection.
 I watched him in the rear-view mirror as I drove away until his graceful image melted into a warm summer daydream.

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Born near Black Bayou in the little Louisiana town of Vivian, Eric Wilder grew up listening to his grandmother’s tales of politics, corruption, and ghosts that haunt the night. He now lives in Oklahoma, where he continues to pen mysteries and short stories with a southern accent. He authored the French Quarter Mystery Series set in New Orleans, the Paranormal Cowboy Series, and the Oyster Bay Mystery Series. Please check it out on his Amazon author page. You might also like checking out his Facebook page.


Sunday, October 14, 2018

Discarded Gold - a short story

Here's a piece of flash fiction I wrote years ago when I was heavily into experimental fiction. I was young and thought I knew everything. Now, I can't remember what message I was trying to convey. Dylan knew what he was talking about when he said, "Wish I knew now what I didn't know then."


Discarded Gold 

Three old men on a park bench watched as she strolled past. Blond, bouffant hair, the red ribbon tying it matching her dress, tight and short. Replacing the magazine on the rack, I hurried from the corner drugstore, chasing after her down the street.
"Wait," I said.
Executing a perfect one-eighty pirouette, she faced me, curtsying, smiling. When she blew me a kiss, I saw she was no more than eighteen and maybe younger.
"You dropped this."
"Not mine," she said.
Withdrawing the bogus blue silk scarf, I basked in her green ephemeral eyes, desperate to bite her puffed lower lip.
"Sorry. Would you have a sundae with me?"
"Will you take me home afterward?"
"No car," I said.
"How old are you?"
"Old enough to drive."
"Can you dance?"
We both could, our swirling bodies colliding as intersecting cosmic rays beamed from a ceiling strobe. Sweat beaded my brow. Our bodies, moving in time, touching, caressing, becoming enamored, interacting, made love to the beat. The girl and I kissed.
Later, as we walked along the beach, hypnotic moonbeams splayed crystal sand. Midnight breakers crashed against the shore, rounding tiny quartz crystals surviving from seamless streams that had never twice touched the exact drop of water.
A distant fire.
"I don’t even know your name."
"Emil," I said. "And yours?"
"Collette."
"I love your eyes, Collette."
"What else do you love?"
"The rest of you," I said, gazing across the moonlit water.
Far out across the bay, dolphins broke the rolling waves.
"I’m sixteen," she said, licking lips so red and swollen that they defied gravity.
"You’re lying."
She didn’t bother denying my accusation.
Behind us, two gulls groused over a dead fish bobbing upside down in the surf.
"Who are we, Emil?"
"Two people," I said. “Do you have to go home?”
“Do you?” When I shook my head, she said, "Are we fated, Emil?"
"Let’s have our cards read and find out."
Chipped red paint lay behind the sign on the door that said SEER, Collette’s hand feeling warm and grasping as I led her through it. A dark woman sat across a tiny table from us, greasy strands of black hair protruding from her red bandanna. She had a bulbous nose and puffy face, and her high cheeks frowned. Malignant eyes stared at us across scarred and stained oak. Liver-spotted hands nervously fingered frayed tarot cards.
"I can contact the spirits, but it will cost you fifty."
Collette punched me when asked, "Don’t you know any cut-rate spirits?"
My pointed sarcasm failed to faze Mother Midnight. Taking my five, she dealt the magic cards.
"The moon is full," she said.
Only broken tiles stared back at me when I gazed at the ceiling.
"Are we in love, Mother?"
"We are all in love," she said.
Mother’s black cat wound through my legs as we exited the back alley. Overturned cans of trash reeked of spoiled fish. I stole a kiss and grasped Collette’s tiny hand.
"Spirits are weak tonight," I said.
"And life is fragile," she said, exciting me further with an unexpected kiss.
Multicolored rockets exploded in the distance, momentarily startling a starless sky.
Collette and I held hands. High above reality, like multicolored balloons, we floated, unpunctured by sharp earthen prods.
"The streets below are dark," I said.
"But the sky above is light," she said, her smile colliding with red and green reflections bounding away from flickering streetlights. "And my heart is full." Before I could answer, she said, "I left my skates on the street."
"Leave them," I said. "Thieves be damned."
An approaching streetcar with an ancient electrical heart struggled as it climbed the steep hill toward us. Raising a finger, I flagged it, grasped Collette’s hand, and pulled her through the door. Above us, the lazy sun split the hazy dawn as Collette’s creamy thighs peeked from beneath her short red skirt.
"I love the dawn," she said.
"Let’s make love at my place," I said.
"We’re making love now," she said.
"But we have no music.
"Then you’re not listening."
Rush hour. Carbon monoxide wafts up from endless vehicles, pointing in straight lines toward oblivion. The noise began filling my cavities of desire with mental glue.
"It’s morning," she said
"Every twenty-four hours," I said.
"Must this end?"
"Well, I should go to work."
"Does your work usurp beauty?" she asked.
Encroaching noise drowned my answer as I stepped from the antique, watching as she waved from the door of the disappearing streetcar.
An old gray dog brushed my leg. When I reached to pat his head, he turned and disappeared behind trashcans lining the nearby alleyway, probably in search of discarded gold hidden behind forgotten scraps of life.

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Born near Black Bayou in the little Louisiana town of Vivian, Eric Wilder grew up listening to his grandmother’s tales of politics, corruption, and ghosts that haunt the night. He now lives in Oklahoma, where he continues to pen mysteries and short stories with a southern accent. He authored the French Quarter Mystery Series set in New Orleans, the Paranormal Cowboy Series, and the Oyster Bay Mystery Series. Please check it out on his Amazon author page. You might also like checking out his Facebook page.

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